Now things are heating up

At first I was a little unsure of his story, but I was proven wrong. This story is actually very interesting, and the I want to know more about the characters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I already like this guy.

I may have just started reading this, but I can already tell that this story has potential. I love fantasy stories, and this feels like one that I will really enjoy. Luisa's journey may have just started for me, but I'm already looking forward to where it will take her... Love it!

I wonder what's going to happen next. Can't wait to find out.

Paul?

I have no idea, who?

You're right. I originally thought Lance's academy days wasn't important, but may'be i'll fill those time skips someday.

Noted... Lance and his friends still have a long way to go, and their journey is just beginning. All I can do is try my best and hope you enjoy the ride.