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Don’t mind me, I’m just rating my own work. Just a few note for the novels, MC is flexible but he’s more on the benevolent side of the people. After all Jieyin is the Buddha. But he can be ruthless to his enemies just like the rest of the prehistoric characters. This novel is based on Chinese mythology, you don’t have to know them to read it, as things will be explained as time goes on. But, it would be easier to go along if you read some of prehistoric novels out there. The more famous novels being the spiritual attainment of ming he. And taiqing asking the dao. I, myself only know a little bit about this topic and every book have different versions. So just sit back and read along. Anyway, hope you enjoy, and before someone ask, no this is not a harem. Most characters of prehistoric accepts disciples instead of getting married and have children with a few exceptions. So there’s no romance, there will be a lot of scheming, and fights though. That’s pretty much it, bye
Hmm, there’s nothing wrong in this story, but im just tired with all the fighting against order and trying to be free trope. It’ s just me. Good work though
It’s a Chinese thing. Xiao means little in English. You usually say that to your junior. Like, hey little billy and stuff like that.
Hey, you can actually try making him like the istari’s in lotr. Would be cool seeing gandalf/saruman like power used for fighting. The Sanctuary can be like rivendell where everything is beautiful. The MC can be like gandalf and guide the modern world to defend earth Something like that will be cool. dont know if this is a good idea, just a food for thought.
Please, let him inherit mokuton.
Ashara only pLz
Just her thank you