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Wowbear2yrCommentedLike a Pokémon center
Many hunters did not have a permanent resident they stayed at as they moved around a lot, so luxurious hotel businesses were started that were specifically for hunters. Most paid to stay there by the day, as the cost was nowhere near what most hunters made from killing monsters day in and day out- Wowbear2yrReplied to zd4zaa
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The thought of him taking his shoes off to enter this dusty, dirty, dilapidated house is hilarious.
"Come in. And take your shoes off." The skeleton instructed Foster, who slowly nodded his head and hesitantly followed him into the cabin. He pushed his shoes off his feet, noticing that his socks were basically rock-hard after becoming soaked in his own blood... Foster would probably need to get some new shoes soon as well. - Wowbear2yrCommented
So...we know he's not Squeamish.
Without a moment's hesitation, Foster pulled the shirt back over this creature's chest, before staring into its eye-sockets. - Wowbear2yrCommented
long-haired guys 😍
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This is a very accommodating system.
"No, but we can exchange memories of other hosts to you for free." - Wowbear3yrCommented
I can tell this girl is gonna be successful because she's already got STYLE for MILES
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Ice cold! 😂
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Playing both sides of the competition...very smart very smart 😔
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Dan is a man with priorities
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This chapter really fleshed out the worldbuilding! Nice job, it's pretty detailed and realistic. [img=recommend]
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Boxers?! 😕 I guess clothing trends are becoming A LOT more casual 😂😂
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I LOVE the cyberpunk vibes in this story so far. looking forward to more!
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Poor Makoto
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- Writing Quality: Very Good. Good use of metaphors, awesome vocabulary. Tone and Mood are on point most of the time. Dialogue is a little stilted, but since most of it's been formal dialogue, it's totally fine. - Characters: Ok. There are too many of them introduced in the first and second chapter, I couldn't quite keep track of them all. - World Background: Good. I can understand pretty well the worlds of the Gods and Demons and Mortals. I like that there are multiple God realms and multiple Demon realms. I hope we'll get to see more of them in the next chapters. - Plot: Very interesting, from what I can tell. It's pretty confusing at times what the stakes are or what the characters' goals are (all pretty important info) but I know the most basic information, which is enough to keep me reading for now. - Additional Notes: - The author's use of similies is very good. They compare a battlefield to a lake of blood, and a small moment of joy in a dark time to yin and yang. - The author switches character POVs between chapters and doesn't indicate whose POV we're in at all, which is extremely confusing. - The author doesn't start a new paragraph when a new character starts speaking, which is also extremely confusing.
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I thought the word was "sanitized"... pretty sure being sterilized means... something else 😶
When Shang Jianyao returned to the 495th floor, there was still about 20 minutes before the cafeteria opened at 6:30 p.m. As certain jobs needed the employees to wash up, be sterilized, or undergo other necessary things after work, the board of directors stipulated that the cafeteria would open half an hour after work to ensure fairness. - Wowbear3yrCommented
lol 😂
Dr. Lin broke out into a fit of coughs as though she had choked on her saliva. She then picked up the porcelain cup beside her and drank two mouthfuls. She randomly brought up a topic and muttered to herself, "Sigh, I've finished all the allocated tea leaves this month." - Wowbear3yrCommented
Sounds a little familiar...
Children of ordinary employees needed to take exams to determine if they needed to start working or enter university. In contrast, children from M-rank families were exempt from taking the exams. - Wowbear3yrCommented
I haven't heard the word Netizen since 2009
Misaki had no idea her nickname had been firmly set in stone thanks to all the netizens voting for it. She was actually quite absorbed in researching how to create a forge and craft two handed swords. After reading many methods and ways to do it Misaki committed it all to memory. Misaki also researched how to make simple tools and how to build a simple house. Not to mention other things that could come in handy.