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Turbine872NowCommentedI think this should be he believes instead of you believe
Out of those hundreds, there might also be Rank 8 Sovereigns. In a nutshell, this mission is nearly impossible to clear. However, although 'The One' is unfair, it is also fair at the same time. You were sent here because you believe that you have what it takes to complete the mission, so believe in yourself and train hard for your own survival."- Turbine8721dCommented
Should be but as
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Should be he takes her not she takes her
"But since that day, that Unicorn has stayed beside Callie as her Protector, with the excuse that he is just waiting for her to grow up before she takes her to the Main Continent as his bride," Uncle Boo stated. "The Unicorn and the Beholder were like oil and water, always butting their heads with each other. - Turbine8727dCommented
Fear in their hearts would make more sense here than fear on their hearts
The Wanderers jumped one by one, and each time they did, the fear on the hearts of the ones who were still on the cliff lessened. - Turbine87210dCommented
I think this should be trolls not goblins. I don’t think Thirteen has any goblins among his subordinates
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Thats why the piece of wheat saved Piggy Bank earlier. The goddess was watching him from the moment he acquired the piece of wheat
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Didn’t register that there two different cult fan groups so Vahniacs would be the better name for this group
Astoria helplessly sighed before asking with a look of fatigue, "Are the Vaanatics and Vahnmaniacs engaging in their verbal war again?" - Turbine87214dCommented
Vahnatics would have had a better cult ring to it
Vahnmaniacs… - Turbine87215dCommented
The orc king is the one who died not the ogre king
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Go of not goof
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There have only been two one on one battles so far not three
After three consecutive defeats, Netero ordered everyone to stop challenging their enemies and retreat a mile away from the battlefield. - Turbine87225dCommented
Beacon of Hope
This paragraph has been deleted. - Turbine87229dCommented'I would have never expected to play a deadly version of the children's game: red light, green light, after ascending to a unigin.' Felix chuckled in derision as he used his senses to gaze into the supermassive menacing eye.
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Cue Equinox showing up again to obliterate her
"A touching story but do you think that would be enough to defeat me?! Even if my defenses have been reduced greatly, all of you will not be able to kill me! The gods that you have are weakened to the point that one attack from me would be their deaths! Only a Chaos Borne will truly be able to kill me as even the original god of light from this world is unable to!" The Dark Goddess of Light Zehirete stated. - Turbine8721mthCommented
Su is the draconic guardian not Alice
The same was therefore Alice who had been brought over. She was the second choice to Su because Su was someone that Rise had trusted to train and share secrets with. However, Alice was a draconic guardian and not a person who could manipulate light mana like Alice could. The best person for the job. - Turbine8721mthCommented
Should be envoy or champion
"Champion Equinox, I have given you the ultimate blessing that I only give to my Envoy of Champion. Use it well as we only have one chance. That one chance will define the future that all of the mortals in the world." The Goddess of Magic Hecate stated as she vanished, and her holy relics disintegrated. - Turbine8721mthCommented
Should be dixon. He wouldn’t need to get Rafiki if he was already in the room
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