Yes. This fic doesn't exactly have an upload a day policy or things like that so its better to have two chaps per week but the chapters are like 3-4 times the size.

Don't get me wrong. There are a few changes including a slightly smarter naofumi but it still ultimately led to the same events.

A novel with exceptional writing quality. However it has a huge flaw. Fanfics are made so that one can derail the plot either through an oc, knowledge or some other kind of influence. But the only thing this fanfic changes is the egg from the wave. It still follows the exact same plot as the novel and is extremely descriptive about the repetitive parts as well. I dont see the need to make the events already in the original almost exactly the same and really detailed as the original. Its supposed to be a FanFic not a snyder's cut to justice league.

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I have a honest question for you author. When will his adventure arc begin? Even if there is pokemon collecting and genetics involved, more than half of every chapter consists of him going outside or just fillers. Also the way he is progressing in both his aura and psychic training is a bit too op isnt it. I was stoked for the academy arc at age 5 which lets face it still might take around 10-15 chapters at this rate when you suddenly dwcided to switch schools and make the starting age 8. Does this mean that it would take atleast 45 more chapters/days(update schedule) to make him that old. Summing up, I wish to ask if there will be timeskips in the future.

It does not matter from which chapter you start your patŕeon... just make one and advertise at the start of each chapter.

These kind of personality going out of control is a massive no for many ppl including me. Considering he realised that it would be a great issue in the prev. chapter and considering he made a great sage replica on his first try should be enough for him to fix this personality disorder. Him going to far and then fixing himself later is a lot of unnessary drama and prbly would make me leave it in the library to be read idk when. Im saying this cuz I hv already done that with a novel.

TBH this book is for those who just wants to read anything with dxd in it. The story is full of plotholes and the novel just bullshits the entire way. The author has literally decided to improve his dao of bs and wrote a novel full of bs. However the writing style and grammar are good.

There are two types of writers- Those who constantly try to change the stories according to the whims of the readers and those who write what they envisioned their story to be occasionally using ideas and suggestions from the comments while ignoring the randoms who demand to change the story. The first type normally drop their novels due to frustration. Tip: When u see a dumb comment like that do a counter like stupid comment +1

Super impressed with how this novel is turning out.... I just hope that it wont get dropped like many others and will have stable updates. Good work

A really good version of an OP reincarnate in Harry Potter. Plot progression is going well with my preferred type of moral compass for an OC. Facts and theories about new concepts are believable and easy to understand. Overall a great budding ff and I hope it won't just get dropped.

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Author you must confidence in ur novel. Just becuz some ppl want something doesnt mean u hv to change it. Ultimately it is ur story that ppl are reading not a story edited by u and written by the people. Rewriting would just destroy whatever motivation you have left. Moreover u havent even touched upon the main objective- chat system. I would recommend u to write more often and finish like 50 chapters b4 making rash desicions. If negative comments affect u soo much then ask someone else to read them 4 u. If u r really not ok with it now then take a hiatus break to clear ur mind.

Me 49

yes please

Cynthia +1