Arigatouuu~ Ur the first review I got🫶🥹 Btw, the story will follow an easy, slice-of-life narrative so there will not be the kind of sentinent system cheating the protagonist🫣

Crystal shrimp: A quite simple Chinese dish

It is Dugu Bo but the translation here is off

Following the footsteps of most authors on Webnovel, I would set the first milestone in the Review section by giving myself 5 stars🤡😅 This is my first creation as a amateur novelist. Hope you guys will support this novel all along the way 🥹 Thank you🙏

Definitely gonna try my best🫶🫣

Yours is the first comment I receive😚

Don’t know how she’ll react in a few years to come🧘‍♀️

I found the mc is just becoming too much of a high-profile and arrogance. Maybe just tune it down a lil bit? 💀

I’d rather the mc be more cautious. Vuz this is the Magus world. There are beings stronger than u; and weaker beings totally capable of annihilating you. Better kill Leylin in one swoop; otherwise the mc seems pretty much idiotic🤦‍♀️

Well, totally agree. Leylin is definitey something. And it would seem too stupid to leave him power-up. Especially consodering mc already the potential of Leylin, the plot would be idiotic, just for a “epic” flash-in-the-pan battle in the finale🤦‍♀️

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