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Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 152 The One Whom You Truly Hold Dear In Your Heart- Bjoy3yrCommented
That's a question. How can it be verified. Statements can be verified. Questions get either a yes or no
A moment later, the word, "Verified" appeared beside the scribbled statement. - Bjoy3yrReplied to TheAdventurerCh 126 I Want a Brother!
- Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 126 I Want a Brother!
- Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 120 There was Nothing, Everything was Nothing
- Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 116 Join Us, Medallion of a Crow Within the Sun
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Lol
"Now, I'm wondering as to how your mother remained sane for so long taking care of such a naughty girl like you." He pinched her nose and Cecilia immediately gave her protest, "I'm not being naughty, daddy! Mommy is just too gullible!" - Bjoy3yrReplied to Kinglist
Dude whatever you said makes no sense. Author said the real dad is not alive. So what is wrong in calling Calvin a dad? It doesn't seem forced but a bit too early. Also who said superman needs to be the strongest guy. Author said Superman is the guy who will come to save them when they are in trouble. Only Calvin came to help them. So saying any other strong person can be Superman is plain stupid. In short everything you complained about is just absurd to say the least. Webnovel should introduce a thumbs down.
In response, Charlotte merely bit her lips and replied that she understood what Calvin was talking about. But she had no choice since she really didn't know what to do to earn money. Back when her husband was still alive, he spoiled her a lot and gave her everything that she needed. - Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 105 Helping All the Way
- Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 99 Earning Money is Unexpectedly Hard
- Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 91 Caravan and the City of Ashmelion
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Sounds like a diet plan
"Yeah... The new record is six days without meeting any bandits. I hope that with this plan, I can make a breakthrough and reach seven days without meeting any bandits." - Bjoy3yrCommentedCh 89 The Ugly Truth Revealed...
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Typo : ...worse than 'ghosts'(not demons)
Calvin bitterly smiled and replied, "No... Demons aren't ghosts, but they are worse than demons since they can physically harm you. Ghosts, on the other hand, can only scare you mentally. But demons? They are beings with a physical form and they are able to kill you." - Bjoy3yrPosted
Read the 9 chapters. Liked the story and the characters. Like you said if you improve your English, it could be better. The story and the world design is pretty good. The author lacks some experience in story telling and his English is a bit lacking. Would like to read this in the future after you have improved your English skills.
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Typo : Should be " ...since 'I' first started playing here..."
Calvin lightly smiled, "Uncle Jerol... It's really been such a long-time since first started playing here..."