daniel_morse

I like the story so far, it had a spin where the main character can do what he wants, consequences be damned, but I do think that the story at the beginning was better than what it is now. The reason as to why is that the main character actually had to try to get the heroines' hearts. Now it just feels like he says a few things in his inner voice and does this one thing to the heroines, then he gets them and the main plot of him trying to save his world is gone.

and yet he hated bring him at the start

why do I get the feeling that this is going to happen a lot for the MC

I liked ice dragon a lot and I will read this book too and I read up to chapter 2 just to see how it is and I liked it too. I will say that there are two things I would like to know one is that with drake, he seemed to change right at the end where he a family man and cares for his family, but at the last chapter he seemed to be out of character right at the end of the book. the other is the style in the way that you write this book seems to take a darker turn in this book then in your last one because of this it feels weird to see this change and was wondering if this book is going to be like all the dark things that we did not see in drakes life

I like this story more then the dungeon one but I wish that the author would change the colors of the bras and underwear and go into more details of them then being the exact same ever time but still I like this story line so far.

why do I feel like John has all of these treasures, and yet there are not all under his control and that othere have more useful for them and not himself

I like the story so far. It shows how people with power can change or stay the same. Overall, a good story is the same as the love and lust manipulation system it has more character development than in this one. now, just one question I was wondering what happened to the body control system because I was going to read that one too.

you know this has been bugging me for a while now. drakes wife is the mother of chaos dragons, and so now can't he use his power of the dragon king to get the chaos bloodline now?

he has magic for a long time. Why does he not put a sound barrier up.

I just realized where Gasper Vladi in all this he was around this time.