There's certainly a potential for this story but I just can't get myself to get into it because of the first chapters style. Though that is just a personal pet peeve, this is as standard as mystery royalty novels go. If you like these kinds of things then this is the stop for you. It starts off pretty fast with what it wants which basically means it's pushing it's plot without overstaying it's introduction. Though in that sense too, the introduction could have been handled better because I still had no clue who was which character until much later when I kept reading. The environment could be handled better too (not to say there wasn't) but I had to fill in the blanks in my head what was what. TLDR: Overall it's a good novel if you're into mystery royalty esque stories. You get to follow the main lead tackle on her problems first hand and quite quickly too. It's a fun read to those who want to dive right into a novel immediately with no breaks or time to think.

Certainly has it's charms and there's a clear plot to this compared to other stories I've read. To me, this novel does have potential to become really good if it keep evolving as it goes. Most of the characters you'll find along the way have their quirks and clear goals, however, you might want to keep reading further to be attached to them. The pacing so far moves quite quickly but that's also common in novels that want to get into the middle of their story.

There's a clear content to it but I'm just confused about it sometimes. I personally would've wanted to see more descriptions of the places besides dialogue. There's personality in some of the characters and conviction.

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Just saw this now! Thank you so much for reading and understanding. I'm currently writing my thesis but I'm already itching to write more for y'all. Thanks again for taking the time. I appreciate it so much <3

I'm glad you like it! Makes me really happy.

You definitely made a good novel with how much work you’ve placed. I think I just have a different taste to how novels are structured but judging from everything so far. I could already tell that the novel would get better the more I read. However, the start was just a bit difficult to get into. I appreciate that there was some humor despite the gritty nature of it. It’s definitely a novel for someone looking for a fantasy adventure because it hits the notes people would look for. I’d definitely recommend it to someone if they were looking for something within the genre.