Wappak
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2020-12-27 JoinedGlobal
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Wappak3yrCommentedCh 10 First Battle- Wappak3yrCommentedCh 9 A Trail of Blood
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My willpower is weaker than Maya's. Oh Jeff..
"Oh god." Maya pressed her mouth on her shoulder. She dared not laugh. She recalled a scene from a movie about undercover cops. With strained willpower to respect the man's final words, she bit her lip until it bled. - Wappak3yrCommented
Aye-oh!!
Maya bowed again before she claimed her earnings. The hat was heavy and the coins clinked like rain. But hearing the audience chant out loud, Maya realized her blunder. Away from the crowd's eyes, she turned and shouted at herself, "DAMN IT! I MADE THEM CHANT THAT WOMAN'S NAME!" - Wappak3yrPosted
Very fascinating story with lots of potential. World-building is topnotch and opens up to limitless possibilities, and we've barely scratched the surface (and barely down the rabbit hole) with this one-shot. Can't wait to learn more about the Hopsch and the Timekeepers, and how they interact with humans and other factions.