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Soal_San10dCommentedAll jokes aside, it's good to see this update. You've got one of the best pokémon fics on here, and I look forward to reading more.
C106 - Ula'ula island- Soal_San15dCommented
A funny thing to note is that every prediction made in the books came true. Check out the Super Carlin Brothers video on Trelawney's predictions; they did a comprehensive breakdown the subject
Dumbledore's mind stopped wandering for a moment. He adjusted his glasses and looked at the frantic Divination professor, wondering what he could possibly tell her this time. - Soal_San15dCommented
Fun fact for those unaware: the tribal sounding part of the song is in Na'vi, the language of the blue people in Avatar.
The song I recommend you listen to is...The Storm: Nightcore by Thefatrat. It's also the song they're singing... - Soal_San15dCommented
The term is bindle
His belongings, a curated selection befitting a journeyman of Hell such as himself, were meticulously packed in a hobo stick bag affixed to his trusty bokken. - Soal_San17dCommented[|Ch.6 Candy People|]
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Isn't she "Tsubaki"-sensei right now?
"Of course Naruko-sensei. We should perhaps prepare first though."detailThis Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert - Soal_San1mthCommented
Me thinks the girl do be jealous
"Daphne… I think you poured a bit too much magic into that one," Harry told her. - Soal_San1mthCommented
Twice you said except instead of what I'm going to assume was supposed to be expect, easy mistake but I thought that you'd like to know
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yes
Selling out to the whims of the chat has begun. - Soal_San1mthReplied to BalancedSelfInsert
You also have to remember that "The Wave" mission is one of the earliest examples of what a ninja can do in the show, as well as something that makes it into almost every fanfic, discounting how it may change, so there is a baseline reinforcement to the memory.
Stopping his stumbling he'd blink a little for nodding. "Right! Figured I'd get a team more grown up than three runts, and you, baah whatever! What do I know about Shinobi business? I'm Tazuna the Great Bridge Builder! I'm paying you too protect me, and my bridge. Now c'mon, we don't have all day." With that said the man stumbled past them and out of the gate. Behind her, Naruko could hear Sakura whispering and Sasuke slightly grumbling. 'I wish I could say Sai noticed something wrong, but there really isn't. Only out-of-universe knowledge is what exposed him...'detailThis Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert - Soal_San1mthCommented
Ambrosia is food. Nectar is the drink.
I slowly started drinking the heavenly drink which alleviated my headache a bit, after that I inspected my body and was fascinated to find out that aside from my headache I was completely uninjured. - Soal_San1mthCommented
I snorted, good job. Now, to wait a few hours.
Staring at the hovering horned man in front of her who bore the Rinnegan in both of his eyes, Naruko had a full-body twitch. "I'm not that bad at summoning Jutsu, am I?"detailThis Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert - Soal_San1mthCommented
Oh. I didn't see that coming. I thought that it was regeneration and not applied healing. A less restricted Recovery Girl. Well, that's certainly interesting.
He was slightly surprised but too tired to do anything. "Sorry..." I mumbled. I activated my quirk and I quickly felt tired. Moving my hand away most of the wounds were healed. - Soal_San1mthReplied to Invisible_Ghost
I felt that you are relatively new to writing, so I thought I'd share some insights I have as one of the more frequent fic readers on here. I'm glad to know that it's been helpful. The only other tip that I can think of is something that you might already be working on: at some point, you need to have your character's existence have a notable divergence from canon. That’s not to say that you have to change everything, just that a pure canon rehash is not usually looked at fondly on here. As it stands, it's early in the story, so it's reasonable for most things to be the same. Just remember the butterfly effect also matters when swapping characters out.
So next episode we'll be focusing on the training part! Sorry again for this being long. I understand how annoying long chapters are. You're just sitting there like, honey why are you still dragging this ON??? - Soal_San1mthCommentedI hope you had the time of your life..." the song comes to an end, and the crowd claps politely, impressed at the young boy's abilities.
- Soal_San1mthCommented"Another turning point, a fork stuck in the road. Time grabs you by the wrist, directs you where to go-" the singer, a boy in dirty clothes stumbles slightly over the chords, his voice fluctuating as if unused to his pitch, but continues the tune anyway despite the flaws.
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Inuyasha should be considered time travel rather than isekai
So, I wasn't wrong in my initial assumptions, that being transmigrated to another world... Or is it reincarnation since I'm in a new body? - Soal_San1mthCommented"Mister Potter? What are you doing here?" Lord and Lady Greengrass turned around and stared at him and his elf.
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um, it's supposed to be iida. I didn't watch the dub, though.
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