I'm really enjoying this story but something is really bugging me. Most of the story I've read thus far seems like a rewrite of a gamer story I read on ff.net. I'm not sure if it moves away from that path as there are minor differences that seem to be building up but it doesn't take away from this sense of deja vu. Other than that this is probably one of the most well written stories I've found on webnovel.

For most part the storyline and characterisations were excellent apart from some minor examples. That said those minor details added up together to make a situation that suddenly destroyed my entire enjoyment in the story. The first around 20 chapters were very enjoyable but the moment it started to crossover all the previous story become a waste.