Gorgy_Pok

Holy shit man Seriously I really liked the novel but in the latest chapters you straight up started writing uninteresting filler without providing any actual plot and repeating / expla something we already know. Mc spent a whole chapter killing some weak ass irrelevant character

Cool

The story is good so far the only thing I don ’t like about the mc is him acting pretentious like he’s above all else. I understand him acting ruthless but being ruthless and acting like you’re a god and everyone else is a dumb shit are different things

😂😂

Watch the protagonist forget about the blacksmith 3 chapters later and never be mentioned again

Nice novel, heavily underrated tho Keep it up bro and don’ give up on writing you have quality and plot and so far there’s been no cliches or romance so I’m all in support of the novel

I’m having flashb acks

It’ not even your family bro

Bro treats 16 year old like they’re mentally impaired either that or the general iq level in that world is low