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Pot_Jorge1yrCommentedOut of all the things I find great about sunny, his thought process and the way he dissects even the seemingly simple things has to be one of my favorites. I'm always amazed at the way you can perceive his emotion through these. I swear guilty is just to good
But maybe… maybe conviction was something else. Maybe having will and determination was not enough, unless they were aimed at something precise, and guided by a singular purpose. After all, having a sharp sword was useless unless it was brandished against an enemy.- Pot_Jorge1yrReplied to Pot_Jorge
Oh and I also have to add that Leonardo seemed to be forcing the idea that his parents would be "forced" to choose a different option. I understand that they might be "suffering" emotionally because Theo won't forgive them, but unlike the former murderer I don't think they have really reformed. At the end of the day there crime was choosing their plan over Theo, which they continued to do back at the battle in Italy.
Ch 1616 Message - Pot_Jorge1yrCommented
I think I'd have to disagree with Leonardo and how he described the situation. after all in his story, Theo would technically be the victim that was murdered and not the innocent villagers. Theo has also never pushed his parents into a bad situation like, so I think this was a pretty bad representation of the situation.
Ch 1616 Message - Pot_Jorge1yrCommented
How is there a maintaining balance and a monthly fee when the monthly fee covers services and protection? Aren't those two the same thing?
Opening an account alone costs a million dollars with a maintaining balance of another million. It also had a monthly fee of one hundred thousand dollars for its services and protection. - Pot_Jorge1yrCommented
Dang, I don't think I ever fully realized how bad sunny had it until this chapter
Back in the outskirts, people lived and died dreaming of becoming one of the true citizens. That simple word hid so much meaning. Access to proper food, human rights, and better life. To all the things that none of them really had. - Pot_Jorge2yrCommented
9t?
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yeah your good, do what you gotta do
This chapter has been deleted. - Pot_Jorge2yrCommentedCh 43 The place he came from
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He should refuse
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I started reading this because I like the author's other works, so I already had high expectations of it. Once I started reading it I started to love it. The main character is cold and calculative, but unlike slot of other LN on this app the author still shows that he is a human with emotions. I like the characters and their many different interactions. The grammar for this is also far better than a lot of stuff on here. I can't wait to read some more chapters when they come out! Oh, even though I mentioned grammar, I'm not the best at it myself so I shouldn't really complain. Anyway I think you are doing a great job on this.
- Pot_Jorge3yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- Pot_Jorge3yrCommentedCh 73 Skillbook grinding