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DaoistsO6KMo

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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
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    While I personally liked the story, I will not lie, it was rushed. The main character himself was a Gary Sue and obtained things very easily. He had no respect for others, although he was born as an Uchiha in a Naruto universe, and lived with geniuses all his life. Any who, the author themselves has acknowledged his and is making a rewrite which will probably be more realistic and slower. In the end, I only continued because I wanted to see how it would go.

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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    Yes it was kinda really rushed. He can't enjoy any world now, being able to destroy anyone. Which makes sense since he started with the world Naruto. But anyway, I enjoyed it either way.

    Ch 24 Not a chapter
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    UH- but he kinda already is planning to learn from Oreo so

    Ch 18 Chapter 17
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    While I like his character mostly, it's as if he almost has no emotion, nor drive. Like he is nothing. But either way, love the story, just wished he had more paitence.

    Ch 14 Chapter 13
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    I wonder why when I read, I feel he gives off empty vibes. But anyway, I cannot wait until he opens up more, or rather see him laugh and joke around more.

    Ch 10 Chapter 9
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    I am impressed, I believed he was being slightly rude even if he was powerful than most, but to be Anbu Captain level is surprising to say the least. I enjoyed this chapter throughly.

    Ch 8 Chapter 7
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    I like this story a lot so far, am enjoying it c:

    Ch 4 Chapter 3
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    I didn't expect him to be Shisui's brother but sounds nice.

    Ch 2 Chapter 1
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
    Commented

    I absolutely love it so far, although why in heavens name would he chose the Uchiha Clan? Has he forgotten the Uchiha clan was massacred or plans to somehow survive? I believe the safest and most comfortable option would be to become a civilian where they have normal level- but then again, he did say he wanted to become very strong. And maybe he will be born before Itachi.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • DaoistsO6KMo
    DaoistsO6KMo2yr
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    I like the story so far, although the thought process was a bit too rushed in my opinion. I believe he accepted it too easily, although it did say it took 5 hours to get clarity. But I wish the thought process was a bit slower, something like where it takes him a while to figure what he will do and how many years for each event. The sudden "that will happen this many years from now, this will happen that many years from now" kind of felt unrealistic. I don't mean to be rude to you, but trying to give criticism. Sorry if the comment upsets you though.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : Transmigration
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