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I'll be brutally honest in this review. The book is still relatively new and has potential so I'm not discouraging anyone from trying the book out. The book is a good read but a lot of factors are stopping me from rating it highly. We don't know what the world is like, little information has been provided. Writing feels like this is a machine translation, though the author's activeness suggests otherwise. Then the updating stability is plain bad. For a new book, at least a minimum of fifteen chapters should be stockpiled before the book is published. Releasing a chapter every 5-6 days is not a good move especially when readers haven't formed a connection with the book and so won't have the patience to wait it out.
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I am liking the book so far but wanted to point something out. Your style of writing makes the paragraph feel incomplete. While the paragraphs are meant to transition into one another, they feel so off . And then there's the issue of the tenses. It isn't consistent. Great job so far π, but still room for improvement.
author you said the match and candle was ineligible (pretty sure this was what you meant not illegible) but still they were upgraded? inconsistency this early on?
coveting Xu Qing will always bring karma. That's why even the venerable immortal didn't do anything to him after he experienced the truth about Aurora death. Because it would bring troublesome karma.
just few paragraphs and author already forgot π€¦π€¦
what's with the switching between pov in the same chapter? huge turn off
oh okay no problem. wishing you the best in your academic endeavors π
why are the updates so slow? and even inconsistent sometimes π