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Tbh the pacing feels shitty, there's no sense of passage of time, it feels as though MC just arrived at the mine a day or two ago and now he is so attached to all of them?
that's one weird quirk, but I'm not judging
he didn't say it's her father's. Just because he dedicated his life to it doesn't mean he owns it.
my thought exactly
i feel you, the delivery of information to the readers is confusing and the translation issues just makes it worse
me too 😂
personally I would honestly still be a tad bit upset about what happened, plus the way he just accepted the whole 'explanation' (if it can be called that 😒) just feels too unrealistic. suddenly he is saying he feels safe as long as she is around?
this is just... poetic
Zede is essentially a mad man tho 😂😂