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I am liking the book so far but wanted to point something out. Your style of writing makes the paragraph feel incomplete. While the paragraphs are meant to transition into one another, they feel so off . And then there's the issue of the tenses. It isn't consistent. Great job so far π, but still room for improvement.
author you said the match and candle was ineligible (pretty sure this was what you meant not illegible) but still they were upgraded? inconsistency this early on?
coveting Xu Qing will always bring karma. That's why even the venerable immortal didn't do anything to him after he experienced the truth about Aurora death. Because it would bring troublesome karma.
just few paragraphs and author already forgot π€¦π€¦
what's with the switching between pov in the same chapter? huge turn off
oh okay no problem. wishing you the best in your academic endeavors π
why are the updates so slow? and even inconsistent sometimes π
you can, don't know why authors don't change their errors