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JFLGoiri8mthCommentedAnd said what? Adui this is very confusing
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Please stop. I‘m enjoying the story so far but his is to co fusing.
Noah's will calmed as it seemed he had to quickly learn how to deal with this vibrant new will! - JFLGoiri8mthCommented
What knowledge? Author so far you only share Noah’s reactions. Not a single line of comments from the new entity. This is two confusing.
The words were veiled in mystery as this voice purposefully chose to withhold crucial information. - JFLGoiri8mthCommented
Author, I don’ know if you are trying a new style but not showing any of the actual comments from this new entity is confusing. You did the same with the will from the forgotten reality. It’ hard to follow, please reconsider.
A foreboding sense of silence ensued for the first time since this treasure began talking, Noah waiting patiently as after a few seconds… - JFLGoiri1yrReplied to LeoStriker23
On the previous DND campaign I played my character was a healer clad in heavy armor and wielding a spear + shield. My domain was war and used to play in the front lines… A.LOT.OF.FUN.
His partner was like a wall, refusing to take even a step back. He blocked strike after strike with his heavy shield, lashing out from behind it with a short spear from time to time to keep the enemies from simply overwhelming him with their size and mass. This was the healer of the cohort, so his fortitude and grit came from his physical prowess alone, not from any kind of Ability. - JFLGoiri1yrReplied to Ben_Blakley
Not necessarily, residual images are more related with our brains capacity to process our environment. For a quick experiment go ahead and take two coins in between your index and thumb, now move them very fast agains each other… if you do it right you will see a third coin, this is the residual image and this happens without reaching the speed of light… not even close. In other words a residual image it’s really just an optical illusion, a mind trick of some sort.
He was so fast that even the laws of the world took a moment to realize that what had been frozen was not him but a residual image so there was no way the 9-Headed Immortal Dragon could keep up with him! - JFLGoiri1yrCommented
That’s cool but what if one of them was using the bathroom right when he pulls them out of the pocket world? ?
Bai Delan didn't understand what his son meant by "we" if he even wanted Meng Qi to stay behind, and it was just then that four flashes of white light shot out from Bai Zemin's chest. - JFLGoiri1yrReplied to TheRealDWCh 979 The last gift and the last words of the Queen
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- JFLGoiri1yrCommentedCh 60 Plans to go out of university
- JFLGoiri2yrCommented
Zora
All the humanoids had faces with no nose nor ears. They breathed through gills on their necks and heard from two small holes on either side of their head. They had no lips either, leaving the row of pearly teeth in their mouth partially exposed at all times. - JFLGoiri2yrReplied to Seishi_
- JFLGoiri2yrReplied to Yoongi_BreadCheeks
Thanks for you patience, I had veen waiting for the pilot read to select this weeks novels before releasing new chapters (the don’t select nivels with more than 10). The good news is that a they selected the book for this week AND there is a bew chapter out. I hope you enjoy it!
Ch 10 The plan - JFLGoiri2yrReplied to Mel_Aniv
- JFLGoiri2yrReplied to Stantheman132
Lol, I'll fix it now. The correct spelling is Johnny.
This paragraph has been deleted. - JFLGoiri2yrReplied to Ezckapel