wolu918

i don't understand why in all the fanfictions our protagonist aims to develop deep bonds with Mo Fan. Mo fan has never looked after anyone except Xin xia and his school buddy. And any favours and opportunities/resources that our fanfiction protagonist (s) gives Mo Fan has never received a return.

had great expectations after reading the first chapter , only to find the MC will follow the plot. MC doesn't even go to Ravenclaw !

why does the protagonist say his thoughts out aloud, can't he just think of them in his mind .

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the story base is extremely good, but the the mc is too hipocrite , . And is too weak hearted, also unable to stand on one decesion. Also naive .

although the story is good, the character design of the main character is bad. He should just work towards his goals, and trying to pity and helping the original characters.

initially was complete 5 stars but now the protagonist completey let gos of his initial reluctance to involve his family in the war, but later in the story he does by guiding the DA. Completey messing up his family neutrality!

man it's another one of those stories where the character will hug the legs of the original protagonist and follow behind like a loyal dog .

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