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I guess he would've prefered this lol
I'm currently at chapter 58 and I'm sorry about the thing i said about them being horny but yeah you copied the whole world, the system, vorden and jayden both of them have similar abilities, the instructor Leo's the same in both novels, even their first expedition is similar, the skills are mostly similar too and you said that the writing is lackluster in the first few chapters so i thought it would get better in 20 chapters or so but there's no noticable change and the whole story is similar they both get a book/pendant fron their parents and both of them have hidden op inheritances of other races and both the MCs are orphans and should attend military school and hide their abilities so yeah you pretty much copied most of the novel and not just the world