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The_Alfa11mthPostedi didn't expect this novel will be good. i mean look at their premise, it's really cliche. but i wrong. while the premise is indeed cliche and seems bad, the story development is really good and the writing style is good too, not at lotm level but it's still good. about the main character, zio. i personally really like him. he feels like a real person, he doubt, struggle, he cheers, confused. and world building. i can't really judge it because when i write about this review it's only have 105 chapters, but so far so good. not otherworldly amazing but good enough. then how about the story itself? well it's really good, while it is indeed will be cliche sometimes, but because the good writing it didn't feel bland. When i write this, the story still yet enter the main story (Zio said it in one chapter, and i can feel it too because nothing big is really happen). but the story building is goddamn good. you can feel this will be good(if the author didn't fucked up). i think this novel have potential to exceed the author's pov. goodluck with your novel author, i hope your success.
- The_Alfa1yrReplied to juamponcenrile
with his behaviour? red priest
He watched the silver specks of light disappear in the night sky, sighed softly, and muttered to himself, "I wonder when I'll be able to possess such extraordinary powers…" - The_Alfa1yrCommented
yeah that's definitely red priest pathway behaviour
"My dear bunnies, my darling chicks, my lovely ducks, or perhaps my adorable lambs? Which one tickles your fancy?" - The_Alfa1yrCommented
that is something what red priest beyonder pathway would say
"Ah, it is good to meet you, my cabbages," he exclaimed with fervor. - The_Alfa1yrCommented
ah yes water is wet
And it is bad. - The_Alfa1yrCommented
lotm reference?
Chapter 2: Miracle Invokers - The_Alfa1yrCommented
visionary
'Though, I have to train and get used to this.' Compass Carburettor nodded, sighing in realisation, 'So, this is how a System senses everything. I can feel the waves of emotions that are directed towards me. So, no matter where a person is in this world, as long as they think about me, I'll be able to sense the relevant Mental Energy from them.' - The_Alfa1yrCommented
it can't be right?
The other end of the room was a study, adorned with books on the shelves that were arranged akin to a library. And placed beside it were a couple of chairs overlooking a table. Currently, the Queen was seated on the chair, wearing a monocle to help her read through a massive book with tiny letters filling up the pages. - The_Alfa2yrReplied to XxTruck_KunxX
it's from chinese novel btw.
Peter stood beside a crying May as Ben was buried in the Cemetary. Peter was dressed in a sharp tuxedo. He had gotten a haircut and looked more handsome than ever in that fitting clothes. - The_Alfa2yrCommented
i have the home ground
Home Ground Advantage - The_Alfa2yrCommented
this is a godly level of foreshadowing
Noticing that Klein was having 'trouble,' Dunn smiled and added, "His lungs turned into the elves; His heart turned into the giants; His liver turned into the treants; His brain turned into the dragons; His kidneys turned into the feathered serpents; His hair turned into the phoenixes; His ears turned into the demonic wolves; His mouth and teeth turned into the mutants, and His remaining bodily fluids turned into the sea monsters, of which the essence was Naga. His stomach, His small and large intestines, and the evil parts of His body turned into devils, evil spirits and various kinds of unknown maleficent existences. His spirit became the Eternal Blazing Sun, the Lord of the Storms, and the God of Knowledge and Wisdom…" - The_Alfa2yrCommented
klein, you have son?
'Son of The Fool' - The_Alfa2yrCommented
worm of spirit?
"At this point, this thing is becoming more like an octopus than a worm..." - The_Alfa2yrCommented
sound like leo
This chapter has been deleted. - The_Alfa2yrReplied to TrueCulture_io123
this is exactly my first thought
This chapter has been deleted. - The_Alfa2yrReplied to iTride
- The_Alfa2yrCommentedNo… I cannot give up.
- The_Alfa2yrCommented
yah, nasa emang kaya sih
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