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I'm just a simple Russian boy, I got vodka in my blood

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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
    Simple_Russian_Boi1h
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    Write about old and new plot holes, please, I will try to either fix them or provide explanations in future chapters.

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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Wardemer

    He wants to kill one of the most important Spirits in the world, the Moon. Of course the other Spirits will be angry, so the Spirit of Agni sent him a warning.

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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Wardemer

    Her name on A O 3 is Bryn_Delgado, she writes fanfiction in the Star Wars, The Hobbit, Lord of the Rings and The Walking Dead. My name on A O 3 is Sirrius_Delgado, but there is nothing new there atm.

    Ch 52 Not a chapter
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Sin_of_Envy

    The consequences... The Spirits really don't like him now. "Attack on Sight" kind of don't like. And yes, his Zabuza persona is now a criminal, but right now the only ones who know about Michael is Iroh, Zuko and his crew. And they know how to keep their mouths shut about a random Waterbender who bested Zuko, he's not near as important as the Avatar. They still don't know about him being a Dual-bender.

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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Wardemer

    It was near the end of the Agni Kai. Zuko threw a fireball to the side to distract Zhao, but the ball flew in the wrong direction and hit Zhao in the face. The Spirits bended his attack because due to Michael's interference they pay more attention to the human world, and Zhao can't really protect his own mind from Spirits.

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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Wardemer

    Yeah, I will. I might even continue the Homunculus one, but I'm not sure. It needs heavy editing too.

    Obviously editing will take a long time - considering that my sister'll help me (bc I have no idea how to look for plot holes, like, at all) and she has a fucking terrible work discipline with writing even her own fanfiction - but I'm not going to let that stop me. Most likely I will add chapters with perspectives of other characters to show the reasons for their actions, complete the lore and have Michael explore the secrets of the Avatar world. But for now, I just want to end this fanfiction, because doing what I did with "Homunculus in BNHA" was bad for my skin. Although I feel like Homunculus and Prideful Wizard seem more like two different fanfics than different versions of one.
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to i_dont_know_if_he

    Thanks, I'll fix that... Eventually...

    Results: seven Non-Benders, one Earthbender - Michael did not know how true were the words about 'A Master who could concur Omashu if he wanted to!' - against one Dual Bender with a staff.
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Elias_XV

    I'll do you one better. "- well, not really the same, but you don't nood to know that -"

    "You can believe me, if you're name feared on the streets, then no one will even think about killing you. At least if they think it's not worth it. So, anyone who tried to rob, attack or intimidate me found himself with a few broken bones. Well, or without a couple of fingers. The Fire Lord and his army use the same intimidation tactics that I do - ну, не совсем те же, но тебе не нужно это знать -" He muttered in his mother tongue. "-and suddenly no one has enough balls to fight back or attack. This is my usual way. Intimidate your opponent so much that he will be afraid to even think of you, fearing the retaliation."
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to TheSoul_Reaper

    How did I miss that? No, how did my Beta missed that?

    Michael confidently led them through old crumbled corridors, not once hesitating to turn. Aang was a little surprised by this, the Temple could be a little tricky for an outsider. But Michael said that he spent half a year here, alone with only Momo's company. He probably needed something to occupy himself. And learning to navigate the halls was a good way to pass time.
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Lord_of_Edge

    No, it's another dude.

    "We? We want you to die in the deepest ditch that you can find and stop disturbing the delicate balance of this world." The spirit replied bluntly. "But I want you to suffer. I suffered for the fact that you even dared to set foot on this holy land." The bastard's voice was calm, but filled with barely contained rage and hatred. Michael also didn't miss the changes in the Spirit's speech. He said 'I', not 'we', which confirmed his guesses. Other Spirits are also watching him.
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Book_Eater

    ... I need to write that down somewhere.

    The teenager smirked and took out a warm black jumper from his bag, silently wishing he had more colorful clothes. Michael flexed his right wrist and imagined a hidden blade flying out of its leather cover. Mentally, he wondered why he thought it would be a good idea, but then he remembered that he was a little bit obsessed with Assassins and their weapons.
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Norwails

    At first I was thinking more about people with bad backgrounds that Michael can transfer from one universe to another, but yes, you're right.

    Jasmine nodded. "You can, but only if they truly want to leave their world. This requires either an immortal loyalty to you or a strong hatred for the world. I think you know what is better."
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to MSTBC

    Wow, no, I won't be giving her to anyone, relationships don't work that way. But she will be happier than her canon self.

    Azula - 17 + 1 (Ty Lee comments (you fucktwat, I will find out where you live and eat everything from your fridge. Even the stale cheese. Especially the stale cheese.)) + 3 (chap comments) = 21
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Rayodino

    Done

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    K.

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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Rayodino

    It's hard to work on something that you don't know a bit of information about. Of course, Michael knows what can be achieved with Energybending, but he has no idea how exactly to start training something like this. Therefore, he waits until they arrive at the Library to look up info there.

    Ch 50 French people
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to The_mandarin_3514

    Michael's existence upsets the balance between the worlds, and the Cracks are only the first consequences.

    "We? We want you to die in the deepest ditch that you can find and stop disturbing the delicate balance of this world." The spirit replied bluntly. "But I want you to suffer. I suffered for the fact that you even dared to set foot on this holy land." The bastard's voice was calm, but filled with barely contained rage and hatred. Michael also didn't miss the changes in the Spirit's speech. He said 'I', not 'we', which confirmed his guesses. Other Spirits are also watching him.
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    I thought I wrote it before. The Cracks that began to appear around the world? That's happenening because Michael's soul messes up the connections between Spirit World and Human World. How exactly it happens I'll explainin later in future chapters.

    "We? We want you to die in the deepest ditch that you can find and stop disturbing the delicate balance of this world." The spirit replied bluntly. "But I want you to suffer. I suffered for the fact that you even dared to set foot on this holy land." The bastard's voice was calm, but filled with barely contained rage and hatred. Michael also didn't miss the changes in the Spirit's speech. He said 'I', not 'we', which confirmed his guesses. Other Spirits are also watching him.
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Zireael_NxP

    Yeah, an "11" year old... I think I said somewhere that I'll change her backstory a little, that includes her age. She'll be 16 when Michael meets her, and she'll have a different set of problems then in original show.

    What would you do if you drunk burned all your notes on the book you were going to write?
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  • Simple_Russian_Boi
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    Replied to Allpowerful

    I moved the last chapter "Mmm, a question" to volume 0, so this paragraph is a bit meaningless.

    Lol, my dudes, why did you start voting for future worlds in the last chapter? This was not a vote, just a preview of what I would write in the future. Most likely I will write about Michael's travels in all these worlds sooner or later.
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