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Well the reason i say cliche is every time an author adds in a girl it usually becomes a romance or harem and let me tell ya i’v seen SOO many of them I used to love those romance snd harems but i got bored of it because all of the people ive read it from did not do anything unique im not hating or anything but its my honest opinion that’s why i love gore bloodshed war AND FOOD 🤤 oh U can write what u want just use your imagination sounds cliche right but let me give u an idea When i say imagination i mean write down what ever u want dont make a story out of it yet u know why The fundamentals are Important Its like ingredients u know how chefs always follow the manual to make your food well the some chefs go byond that and make their own kind of food Make sure u add spices K... lol i meant like bloody Battles or little plots that makes a catalyst like what if your mc hmmmmmm OMG YES FOUND ONE mc go on a date with the girl he likes and apparently their was a guy that was semi obsessed When mc is not around she would get raped but never tell mc comes back and notices that her feelings are not genuine now plot is not done we need mc to fall a little more rage he impure In the rage side we need hIm to be a berserker Well i hope thats helpful do try Your imagination make it feel like your making a movie where u are the star and acter of your movie
Wow noice i see thats it i know u had something in plan good job 👏 im not done reading im just giving review i cant give Your book a name made taking time u worked hard in All i Can give an advice from my reading point of view is hope u dont put any cliches im Not saying u cant put some but something spicy I know some books that caught my attention im more into the gore the adrenaline the unexpected or plot diversion And i admire your persistence thats what makes a writer
Hi its Me im reviewing im just going to say that the romance thing and the whole lovey dovey thing is a little weird Because the girl that the MC loves blushes just from him agreeing? The reason it confuses me is that does the girl likes him? or is she a hoe and is going with other guys and she thinks he wants some? i know i sound like im hating or something but just asking is the MC more focus on developing himself or romance
Hello just started reading so far its good In my opinion 👍
Stop complaining and read or shut Up and leave we dont need Your Kind of comments in here