JellyFish000

Sadly, this book didn't pass contract application, so I wanted to make a new one and try again.

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Plot and premise are interesting. Right from the start, the action and high stake battle draw you in. There's this feeling of mystery around the MC. Grammar is good, only a few minor spelling mistakes, completely fine for a non native speaker like me. Overall, a good novel that makes you want to read more!

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Shameless author here! Even though I think my novel isn't 5 stars at all, gotta do it for the motivation, am I right :3 Novel is about an ordinary guy u can find anywhere on Earth, living his 2nd life in a cultivation world with many struggles. He doesn't have any grand dream of immortality or splitting mountains and seas. Just a classic man's romance. Traveling the world with a sword, destroying monsters and enemies, enjoying the best beauties. Join Xitu on his adventure to see if he can achieve this simple ideal!

Interesting premise. The 1st chapter with action immediately hook reader in. The grammar is ok and i dont notice any glaring mistakes as a non-native speaker. The worldbuilding feel wide and dreamy, but be careful though, if u add too many elements at start, it might feel a bit overwhelming. Few too many unknown terms at start too i think, but maybe that's just bcs i skim through. The characters so far feel alive and dialogue feel natural, but u're trying to build 2 mc,i think? it might backfire. Overall, a good slow-burn novel. I see author put a lot of effort in. Keep going!

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