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I don't really like where this is going, enemies getting fed power ups randomly, and Tobirama being one of the most paranoiac man alive accepting spoon fed knowledge and a "mission" that require he kills his grandniece and a past clansmen who for now didn't do shit against konoha ... It's unrealastic and starting to be a bother since Ryusei has to work for years with everything and some already OP characters with infinite chakra which is already a bust can apparently multiply endlessly, get even more busted out of nowhere ... The Edo Tensei trope is a pain in the ass, unkillable enemies, he can summon all the strong people now since he doesn't need dna, infinite chakra which is already unrealistic. Where the fck does the cakra comes from in the first place, this jutsu doesn't make sense, it's supposed to come from the corpse and a strong Ninja safrificed and you are telling me he somehow found tons of Kage and Peak Kage level ninja in this era when there are barely 10 Kage level ninja alive ...
Damn, he destroyed 3 low to mid level kage alone in under 5 mins, even though he is the absolute counter to 2 of them, impressive haha our boy is starting to reach Madara and Hashirama's heights, bet he is stronger than they were at his age
Same issue, you don't pop Peak Kage class shinobi like that even if you are Madara and got access to God Tree clones, otherwise there's no point. And if all it took to get to Minato's technique level was a few months at best of Madara's guidance then wtf
Hmm. That fast. Could be Sakumo if he isn:t already dead. Or a young Minato
Yeah, Jane and Alec alone could have destroyed the Cullens in the movies were it not for Bella's shield, and Dimitri is the godly tracker, without them the Volturies are way less threatening even if they still are quite a lot
Little mistake, when people introduce themselves, I suppose when Asuma speak of his grandfather you mean Hiruzen ? If so Hiruzen is Asuma's father. Hiruzen is konohamaru's grandfather though Love your work tough, keep it up
Well if he does he's dead, there's no way a relatively peaceful Tai Lung content with his life will spare Aang or the ones reponsible, he'll go berserk and remind them why he's called the fire Avatar
Well Weaver’s mask is probably gonna be switching on and off for quite a while ! Though his flaw specified kill, not maim haha
I really like your story, but man 1€ per chapter is extremely expensive, I'd be willing tosusbcribe on patreon if the chapters were priced around the same as other creators/translator which is around 5€ per 10 chapters in medium, I think you lose quite a bit of money and support from the very expensive prices
Compare this chapter with Chapter 6 for example, it looks like an AI took over the whole thing