Anthiaris

Dude, check out the previous chapter and compare it with the last 50% of this one, it went from properly constructed sentences to one line sntences, that should get a , but get a - and back to the line, multiple times, something clearly changed

Nice chapter but the the whole chapter is constructed weird, I mean what is this thing with the sentences not ending like : Blablabla blablabl abla - - blablabla. It's annoying

Well, it looks like it's Baldr that's staying behind, must be him fighting Nephis augmented with Sunnys shadows by wielding the name of thunder, then pushing them into the portal, though he could have stayed behind only for leaving Caster after him, don't know

The end was confusing, I didn't get the whole part about Emily and Leah, I think in canon it's supposed to be that Sam was in a relationship with Leah prior to turning, then imprinted on Emily which then caused his relationship with Leah to crash obviously. When he says he imprinted did he mean Emily or Leah and who is the girl he can't spend his life without ? A little clarification would be nice :)

Little fishes thinking they can beat one of the strongest blood mage in history who is also a dragonrider, if it comes tofighting he'll absolutely destroy their asses on dragonback. Vaghar is old as hell, while Vermithor is in his prime, and Draezell has better skills/strength than Aemond, dude overestimate himself. If it comes to a fight then Vaelarys house wins

Honestly I don't really like Fleur, used way too much in other ff but nevermind. I donw.t get why she that angry at him, I mean they are friends at best, she isn't his girlfriend, so why the fck should he tell her about past escapade when he didn't know her, she react like he cheated on her I mean wtf

Historically they can't, the ones that changed were the tribe warriors, which meant the chief and his troupes, though she did change in the movie, probably next year, she shifted around the time when Bella went to see Jacob who was hanging out with Sam and all after she rejected him, around the end of the 2nd movie i think

I kinda like this one a little more tbh, he can be extremely powerful without one especially if he start working on his magic. Moreover dragons weren't bonded with Rider since the dawn of their existence, I don't see why that should be an obligation. Plus finding him a rider would force you to create and integrate in your story a whole character as much as Bahamut himself which would decrease his screentime which I donw.t want

Zephyr getting in a pinch against an unknown youngster in one on one ? Dunno if it's canon but how in the world is Weevil, around 15 years before canon strong enough to battle the dude who was an admiral during Rocks era, I mean wtf ?

I love your story man but his shifting is taking a little too long tbh, I mean it triggers from feeling threatened/being in close proximity with Cold Ones, and he's been spending a whole lot of time with Jasper/Alice and feeling angry/scared for him not to have shifted arleady, I mean the Quileuthe shifted only from feeling the Cullens, not even interacting with them, same with Jacob. I don't mind the chapters, they are nice but please make him shift soon, it's edging us way too long already, almost 30 chapters, almost 2 months