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2020-12-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • TempAccount
    TempAccounta year ago
    Replied to Leecherking

    It could also be referring to one hour there, one hour back.

  • TempAccount
    TempAccounta year ago
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    The story feels very underwhelming; most interactions feel unrealistic. Additionally, the English not being good just adds to the incongruity of the book. If the author really wants to improve, he/she should picture his/her own interactions with people and ponder if the ones present in the book feel normal. The MC also heavily lacks initiative/focus, even after understanding his ability somewhat and how to progress it. Anyways, good luck improving.