ur story is trash thx goodness i read it on some site.... and for those who pay to read this trash i pity you, your brain cells must be gone from reading this lol

Hey author don't know if you are reading this but you should check your novel on this website Light novel cave It's something you should be happy about.

damn

u should add some tag author

for me dc is better than marvel

This won't get far a couple of weeks this ff will be dead I hope someone reads this before it gets deleted

and he is 5 lol

if you want to read a better story read the trash of the count i mean no harm but holy sh*t i made to chapter 3 before stoping maybe it's my own preference but i dont like this story maybe for others like it but to me nooo i hope someone read this before it get deleted

don't you fking dare do it author

pla don't make it a harem

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i stop at chapter 2 one sentence made me stop like I don't have the energy to continue reading. I feel like the MC will became a simp like why da hell will you include the girl? he betray you you should do the same ignore her let her fking die.... yeh it's good but it's not for me( sorry for wrong Grammar )( im going to 5 star this to not get delete and warn future readers )

plsss someone answer me is this novel a babysit type? i mean will he like im going to protect this younglings etc...

it's good but kinda cringe sometimes ofc i didn't like it i kinda didn't but its goos

author don't get discouraged of the negative comment it's good and let me remind if you don't like the story then don't read or made your own novel it his story let the man do what he want btw i also hate rias i only watch the anime

yeh I'm on the bad side this is bad look i know that this is good but for it's jud bad because its so fuking stupid that he gave he's power away.... its good for other bad for me

yehhhh for those who like hero story this is for you and for those who's don't then don't read this cause all i read is “im going to save her all that sh*t" maybe im worng for later chapter but nah im not going to stick this one still i will give it 5 star cause its just feel right

is it really a harem novel?

yup this is not for me hahahahhaa too bad