I would be happy to work with you to proofread and edit. The English has many grammatical errors in tense and word usage, and doesn't flow smoothly, but I am loving the story.

She felt INVINCIBLE, not invisible. Big difference in meaning.

A great story with excellent character development. I only wish it were better edited for grammar, word use, and spelling. Has the sequel mentioned by the author been written yet? I would love to read about what happens with the prophecy!

*coups d'etat*

It seemed like it started out as a new chapter, but part way through it cut back to an old one, and the next one is old, too, but no more "sorry, dummy chapter" at the beginning. I wonder if she got in trouble for getting so far behind?

Why do you keep adding dummy chapters instead of just adding chapters when you've completed them? Is it some rule of Webnovel's? It's more frustrating to see the update indicator only to find that another dummy chapter has been added, with no update to the previous dummy chapters.

Has this been picked up? When will we know?

it looks like the previous chapter was corrected, but this chapter now jumped back at the end to an earlier chapter.

Klara wouldn't want to stay second. Dangerous for Hazel, and I'm sure Lucien knows that.