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Matthias_Schmidt4 hours agoCommentedi don’t know if you noticed but this chapter isn’t a master piece. I have to say that I enjoyed the Charakter you made for the Story. It kind of fitted the narative until you did your time skip. You said in an AN that you found isues in the book. Why didn’t you fix them instead of pulling the ROB out of your hat. If you had annonced that you Pause to rewrite some stuff we would have understood. We would have waited and picked up the better version once you are done. That is just pointless. I hope you take the advice to heart and rework instead of ruin your book.
- Matthias_Schmidta day agoCommented
damn Gerald really needs to Die soon before he hurts Allison
- Matthias_Schmidta day agoCommented
old fool everyone that could be a liability is a werewolf and the two strongest among them are his mother and Allison because they are already alphas
- Matthias_Schmidt4 days agoCommented
This is taking a really nice turn here. More Apha's
- Matthias_Schmidt4 days agoCommented
Lys is still missing
- Matthias_Schmidt4 days agoCommented
*cough* its eight as you have missed Lys *cough*
- Matthias_Schmidt4 days agoCommented
- Matthias_Schmidt4 days agoReplied to Gawd
if you go with the system name he would have a space capable fighter by now and would dominate the world already.
- Matthias_Schmidt4 days agoReplied to LocalDrunk
that would be really great to see.
