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Kyogo

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2020-12-21 JoinedUnited States
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo9mth
    Posted

    Finally a good novel with a more realistic and smartish MC. The progression of the story is not too fast nor too slow. World building has been kinda slow but the MC is still stuck in a remote place so it makes sense. It’s a decent read when surrounded by hot garbage on this site 👍🏼

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    Arcane Innovator
    Fantasy · CosmicQuill
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo9mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 27 My Seventh Birthday
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    Arcane Innovator
    Fantasy · CosmicQuill
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo10mth
    Replied to LucioOrdo

    Yea just found the novel on qidian , no wonder the author calls japan “island country” lol

    Ch 68 Chapter 68: Meeting with the Father of the Automobile
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    The Rise of Australia
    History · Mr_Lajus
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo11mth
    Commented

    MC gets everything he thinks of so easily, making the story boring and unrealistic. The author should add more conflict and make it harder for MC instead of getting everything handed to him.

    Ch 68 Chapter 68: Meeting with the Father of the Automobile
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    The Rise of Australia
    History · Mr_Lajus
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 12 First Step As A Sorcerer
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    Blood Legacy: New World Of Doom
    Fantasy · Arkinslize
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Posted

    Great book but holy crap is the development slow af it took 1000+ chapters just to level up to the 2nd order when there’s like 8th order beings in the story… I understand author keeps pumping skills and stats for him when he’s still 1st order but the order of the power up just fucks up the story. Like how many skills is he going to have by the end of the story smh. Please hurry up the development! because I can’t see this novel ever finishing lol

    altalt
    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    probably the dumbest plan ever smh so many loopholes jesus

    Ch 48 Li Cong Tian’s regret
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    Life Changing System
    Fantasy · Genrei
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    Grade 2?

    ~Grade 1, Level 5.
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    Myriad Islands
    Fantasy · The_Celestial_King
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Posted

    It’s a decent novel not a great one but good to pass the time. Some improvements for author to think about would be details pertaining to characters like hair color , skin color ,personality, relationships , etc. Also, MC so far gets everything handed to him ; there are zero dificulties for him which makes the story bland and predictable.

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    World Online
    Games · jdbeue
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    what if some of those prisoners were imprisoned unlawfully , shouldnt he have seperated them first because just killing them?

    Ch 328 Left and Right
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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Posted

    honestly the story,grammar, and world building are pretty good. The only thing that is annoying is all the excessive anime references used in the novel. It’s just cringe tbh.

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    I mean can’t you at least take an item/abilities or two ? Unless the plot is waiting for better items/abilities idk

    Dilan didn't want to take any of the ability crystals or equipment for himself. That hadn't been his plan and he wouldn't act selfishly all of a sudden either.
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    Undying Warlord
    Action · HideousGrain
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    29*

    Health= [28]
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    Undying Warlord
    Action · HideousGrain
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    Mc did all the work there’s no need for them to be greedy atm

    It was not as if he was against absorbing the Essence crystal, but if the three would continue to behave like this, they would never get greedy for power.
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    Undying Warlord
    Action · HideousGrain
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    no human race?

    Under the ownership of Ninecent were five major cities representing the five races in the game: beast, dragon, dwarf, elf, and demon. In order to get there, players could use the teleportation NPCs' services at the price of 100–500 LSC depending on the distance.
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    Last Shelter Online
    Games · Sabet_Saga
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    just kill all the nobles they will just bring you future problems

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: Confrontation[2]
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    The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess
    Fantasy · Mohitkumar
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    why is this guy so nice to everybody 😅

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    Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
    Games · ApexPen
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    what the heck is the truth lol

    Ch 7 Time flies
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    Lord of the Truth
    War · TruthTeller
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo1yr
    Commented

    He shouldve at least cultivated to the transcendance realm before going imo

    Ch 321 Departure
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    Prime Originator
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • Kyogo
    Kyogo2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 22 Hero and Villain
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    My legendary class is Husband Of Deathwill Sisters?!
    Games · Sixth
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