The actual story is very entertaining , I like your mc. Looking forward to his college entrance exam/fight

I’ll be dropping this book

Just fyi you really do not have to explain each stat after the first 2nd only the newest one acquired . I know it adds words but it really is very annoying to readt makes me want to drop your book & read another. Right now I just scroll past. But if this keeps up, when the chapters go premier

I’m a chick & even I don’t needt stuff in an action adventure story. Sometimes it is the journey .

This has a better then average ‘good start’. Let’s see where youe it from here

Well So far I like how this story started. It differs enough to make me Want to read more. The ml isn’ t too wimpy or confused/surprised that you want to slap them. So, I’ m going to read more then 5 chapters to see how this story goes. I may even pay for more if it’ s got a great 🪝

Rightious I like the pay back to the husband!!!!

You have a great story here. I’ so interested in what happens next that I missed getting sleep. Please, keep on going with this one, I would love to see how the two kids turn their life’ around & of course if he picks her to be part of the magic in the future. On pins & needles waiting🤩

Like your silly jokes…

Does this book ever get better? This women is boring

Have to use daily fast passes for now but worth it so far. Keep up the great writing. You are in my top 5 rotation, it’ only my 2nd year with webnovel

Absolutely love this story! I will be following it till you stop writing it. Thank you for the great dreams😎

I sm hooked on your writing style. Do what you need to, to keep your flow. soon ill be able to pay for chaptets instead of doing the read one free s day. stay healthy😷

Love the F lead! She is getting stronger in each chapter. The husband & her father needs a bit of work, they are a bit silly in their reactions. l love her new guy & how her company got a real chance to become a powerhouse in the entertainment industry. lets see how her Star shots across the heavens!🧐

Agree With the petson who suggests he nock down door & take her to the county marriage office & register them!😎

I just started reading your book today. 9-4-2021. Im not a member yet because of my health issues , i dont currently have a dyesdy income. However, i will use the voting stones to help with this book as i can. I Am a booKworm & love to read. i will stop after 4-4 chapters if the Book is boring. i really am invested in reading this book to yhe end or to wherever you decide to quit. if you like this plot line id really would love to see how you wrap up all the drama without a cheesy ending. this is the kind of book i would have paid hard cover prices to read. dont give up, you are good at this. [img=recommend]

I really enjoyed the plot & flow. Especially how both their families have past connections. i would have liked to have continued reading to see what kind of drama was stirred up between the 2 ladies. Alas, thats wHere this ended. Hope to pick it up later, please keep up the great writing . Im s bookeorm & read up to 7-8 stories concurrently !

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I think Yanzi needs to consider carefully her Actions. She should remember why this baby marriage is being arranged. Hao Ren is trying to do right by her, in spite of her mistake. He has her dragon core & is able to increase its levels. He is also considerate about everything to do with her family. Please doN’t make Yanzi be too bratty.

Cool, nice twist on the tein thing!