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Nope, that’s just an evil thought!

The actual story is very entertaining , I like your mc. Looking forward to his college entrance exam/fight

I’ll be dropping this book

Just fyi you really do not have to explain each stat after the first 2nd only the newest one acquired . I know it adds words but it really is very annoying to readt makes me want to drop your book & read another. Right now I just scroll past. But if this keeps up, when the chapters go premier

I’m a chick & even I don’t needt stuff in an action adventure story. Sometimes it is the journey .

This has a better then average ‘good start’. Let’s see where youe it from here

Well So far I like how this story started. It differs enough to make me Want to read more. The ml isn’ t too wimpy or confused/surprised that you want to slap them. So, I’ m going to read more then 5 chapters to see how this story goes. I may even pay for more if it’ s got a great 🪝

Rightious I like the pay back to the husband!!!!

You have a great story here. I’ so interested in what happens next that I missed getting sleep. Please, keep on going with this one, I would love to see how the two kids turn their life’ around & of course if he picks her to be part of the magic in the future. On pins & needles waiting🤩

Like your silly jokes…