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Naleef_Cool3yrCommentedWoah! I can imagine her running through that wonderful field and the birds and butterflies flying around... It sounds magnificent! So incredibly written!
She followed Maryam's voice and raced towards the other end of the field in her squishy shoes and her movements spoilt the quietness of the field and scared off the birds and butterflies which had been sheltering there. Thasneem got frightened of the sudden movements of the fleeing birds and fluttering butterflies and screamed her lungs out until she reached the other end with a pounding heart.- Naleef_Cool3yrCommented
Wow... So beautifully written!!
Thasneem stood in the riverbank, staring at the flowing river. She watched as a frog hoped towards the edge of the river and leapt into the water with a splash. She saw the sand and stones through the crystal clear water and was fascinated to see the colourful tiny fishes swimming inside of it. She felt sure that the river wasn't much deep in that part because she was able to assume the water level accordingly because of its clearness. She waded through the knee-length water and reached the other end of the river.