Loved it! It was amaaaaaazzziiinngg ! Keep up the gud work! Never stop ur hard work! It has increased my curiosity to know that how would the next chapter be like! U r doing great ! Never ever think like u r not improving bcz CORRECTIONS OF MISTAKES and HARD-WORK makes a person perfect

To be honest... I personally loved it ! The adjectives u used to describe the situation were awesome ! That terror..that nightmare.. uhh I felt it ! Keep up the gud work and never loose hope !