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I don't know why there are so many good reviews. I mean, the story line is quite okay but there are a few negative aspects. First, author tends to repeat himself, for things he want to hype he repeats it in three different paragraphs. Plus, there a lot of info dump. Second, characters are kind of stupid, just my opinion though but the act often without thinking it through. Third, even though the author dumps a lot of info relevant facts are often mentioned two or three chapters late.
You may not remember me, but I commented on a different account in your first book.I had to open this account because my account was stolen.anyway, back to the point, your story is good, and your writing is better than before, but you throw a very slow episode.I have to say, this topic is more fluid than the other one.But please drop these sections quickly.If it goes like this, maybe one day you'll explode.