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    ARandomThingg23 years ago
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    Overall, this novel is great, but I can't help feel its a bit rushed. When mc needs something, someone or something shows up and helps him get it. If mc gets a material and needs a blacksmith to use it, someone in the next few paragraphs will show up and have a job related to a blacksmith. Like i said, its a good novel, but the grammar needs to be cleaned up a bit.