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Zachary_Whitney

Zachary_Whitney

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2020-12-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney1yr
    Posted

    Enjoyable story with good characters and an interesting setting the Dungeon building aspect is honestly my favorite part my only complaint on that is how short those parts actually are id like to see a better balance between the adventure and dungeon building, other than that my only complaint is the short amount of chapters uploaded id like to see more. Overall I do believe this novel is worth supporting and am eager to see where it goes.

    Dungeon of Niflheim
    Fantasy · Sword_immortal1
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney1yr
    Replied to XILO

    🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣

    A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World
    Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney1yr
    Posted

    This is an interesting story so far with a good concept and foundation it's also something I'd enjoy more but can't because of how the novel has been translated it is actually dragging down the overall story and quality due to a lot being lost in translation. The grammar and sentence structure is confusing, disorderly and is just so chaotic to say the least. I'm not sure if this story just isn't edited properly but the english translation has been lack luster and I'd be willing to rate this much higher if I didnt feel the need to have to hire a personal translator just to make heads or tails of some of the dialogue. If the author is willing and able to fix the issues stated above id gladly give this a 4 star minimum.

    The Invincible Full-Moon System
    Fantasy · Mrboogey13
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 1 Returning From The Nightmare
    Oh My God! Earthlings are Insane!
    Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

    Ch 1 The Beginning of the End
    Alien Evolution System
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney2yr
    Commented

    also vampire didn't the mixed blood girl use some on him?

    As the mark of Atlantean royalty, the eye was difficult for outsiders to control. Silverlight said that Xiao Lin could, but it did not mean she meant the current Xiao Lin. Xiao Lin might possess the potential, but he was too weak at the moment. He could somewhat feel the connection to the eye, but activating it would require tremendous amounts of energy, so he had yet to try.
    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

    Ch 720 Leap—a New Chapter (End of Volume V)
    Astral Pet Store
    Eastern · Ancient Xi
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

    Ch 1 World of Astral Pets
    Astral Pet Store
    Eastern · Ancient Xi
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

    Ch 1 The Drowned Young Man
    God of Fishing
    Eastern · Pig That Can Howl Like A Wolf
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  • Zachary_Whitney
    Zachary_Whitney3yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

    Ch 1 The Drowned Young Man
    God of Fishing
    Eastern · Pig That Can Howl Like A Wolf
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