Silver_Valor

I will start this off by saying I do enjoy this novel and it does have some strong suits such as characters, world, and I am interested in the premise and where its going. However the problems with this novel are glaring. Severe lack of punctuation which makes conversations hard to follow, repetitive conversations or just how people talk to each other. The entire prologue is nonexistent we are just thrown into the story where he returns and are just expected to know things that were never shown to us. Like how Kael was reborn from earth, he has a system and his system has changed throughout his seventeen years in his new world. He apparently is a magic swordsman with frost, blood magic, and light that were given from the system but he never gets any real rewards now which is constantly pointed out and he apparently disappeared when he was seven and we don't know why or where he was for ten years we know nothing about his life on earth, his death or those 17 years in his new world but all of this is referenced throughout the book like we were told when the only info we received is from the book description or just thrown in for convenience and he himself never actually finishes a task its so slow he still hasn't even fixed a bridge and is constantly jumping from one thing to another. If you expect the audience to know and understand things then you need to provide hell 5 chapters of info at the beginning would be a godsend and make the story more coherent.

Author here with my obligatory 5 star review!! im excited to share the world of Thea with you and I hope you like it and check it out!! There's a lot I want to tell you about Essence, the revival process, Paleontologists, the power ranking and the world were dinosaurs beast and myths come alive!

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It is a fantastic story and a breath of fresh air among the more recent novels. Good writing, interesting characters, and a nice steady goal for the mc. I am eagerly looking forward to more of this novel.

A very nice take on kingdom building, interesting characters, and very detailed and well written. The story flows well it is very heavy on the slice of life, which is appreciated. Since it is a kingdom story with knights, i do look forward to seeing some more combat here and there. There does appear to be hints of a bigger plot and some intrigue. I am curious to see how the MC's family is doing or seeing them reunited at some point and more of the world as well. Would recommend this story and am eager to see where it goes!

Enjoyable story with good characters and an interesting setting the Dungeon building aspect is honestly my favorite part my only complaint on that is how short those parts actually are id like to see a better balance between the adventure and dungeon building, other than that my only complaint is the short amount of chapters uploaded id like to see more. Overall I do believe this novel is worth supporting and am eager to see where it goes.

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This is an interesting story so far with a good concept and foundation it's also something I'd enjoy more but can't because of how the novel has been translated it is actually dragging down the overall story and quality due to a lot being lost in translation. The grammar and sentence structure is confusing, disorderly and is just so chaotic to say the least. I'm not sure if this story just isn't edited properly but the english translation has been lack luster and I'd be willing to rate this much higher if I didnt feel the need to have to hire a personal translator just to make heads or tails of some of the dialogue. If the author is willing and able to fix the issues stated above id gladly give this a 4 star minimum.

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