Clinton_Collum

So Roxy is an idiot...

True, don't steal panties. Buy them like a proper gentleman. Don't be shy to request extras, no one is judging you.

Suddenly turns into a script narrative a few chapters. Wasn't great to start with, but script style is just lazy writing and takes you out of the narrative. Seriously, why are you doing a script? No one is turning this into a movie or show.

Why did this suddenly turn into script writing? It wasn't like that in the prior chapters and I don't read scripted fiction. That's terrible, go back to the original style, I'd rather not drop this so soon.

Ah, dragon blood. Never seen that in the hundreds of fanfictions I've read before. Nope, so unique and creative! Sarcasm aside, what is with the lack of creativity among authors these days? I mean all authors when I say that. Fanfiction is dragon this dragon that, hotd this hotd that, and then you have the "new" fantasy scify authors where everything is litrpg.

Brush, he isn't in human form, so why are people reacting as if he were? This is why he needs a human form. No one sees a fire breathing scaled dragon an thinks, "I hope he doesn't take my job". No, they think, "holy crap, a dragon!" Author must have been drunk or high to write this.

That's not how anatomy works, that's not how anatomy works at all!

Wilson!!!

How to tell if something is Chinese. Reference to league of legends. Insinuation about wearing a green hat Casual murder hobo, like slaughtering defeated prisoners.

Really hope he doesn't stay in a dragon body the entire time. Shape shifting into a humanoid is a common power dragons have in fiction, and even if he hated his past life as a human, it wasn't because he had a human form. It is just more convenient. Also, thumbs.