Senzu_Bean

hey, grade 9?!? the grade just before highschool?

3 story houses near the city can never be considered bungalows

probably has facial recognition or finger print id

shouldn't it be I don't like sweet things?

are these small servers? this sounds very unrealistic

"They" exists. It is a term. A very simple one

it can also stand for someone who kills other players outside of matches but, since in the context of the story, it's meant to mean they're going against each other in a match, I figured that was the important part. You can also find more info online under player killing as well. hope that helps ^^

player killer. it's a game term for a match in which you can kill another player. iirc, it's mostly just for mmorpgs

perhaps you could change it to "after raising her for so long". the way it's worded makes them appear estranged and they never were

Luna?