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SorryImJustDiamond is the name of the webnovel profile where I put the book. You can check it out there.

Because I moved it to a different account

Of course everyone needs a motive or a pushing factor to do things. Like why do you go to school everyday? It's because you want to get a better job in the future. Same here, why does he want to industrialize his town despite that fact that he only lived in this town for just one day? It just feels forced.

Okay I've caught up to the last chapter which is chapter 87 and I think it's time for me to do a review. Writing Quality...I'll give it a five despite it having small errors because the author correct them immediately when a reader pointed it out which is a good habit I must say because other author's won't even correct their mistake. Stability of Updates: 5/5 on this one. The author updates 2 chapters daily and the consistency is what it's making it rise to prominence. Story Development: The story is progressing smoothly albeit technology ambition of the mc is advanced for that world. However...the good thing is that the mc is building a foundation for that technology to be built...which is a plus. If I were to think of an advice, I'd say to reduce the jargons because it makes some readers sleepy. Just a simple analogy or 1 paragraph will do when emphasizing the idea. Character Design. I love all the characters and I wish the author will explore them one by one because they have potential to do something big in the story. The Volume 1 was introduction and Volume 2 is modern tech introduction...which is the selling point. I hope in volume three we get to explore each of the characters so that we readers can understand them further. Personally, I'd want to see why Tiffania acting tsundere in front of Alexander... World Background. Since this is an historical fantasy genre, expect some alterations and similarities of the events here in this story with the real history. The story took place at 1920s but the technology are ten years ahead...so basically a world with 1930s tech. How did this world have technology similar to pre WW2 tech without ww1 happening? Well don't rationalize...it's just fiction.

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I think author's preference plays a huge part on the decision making here. Granted it's obvious that the author isn't a military geek and possibly doesn't have time to research everything because of the frequency of the update. As for the inability of the crew, I think training and education will solve that. That's all,

I think Black Hand in Ruthenia is done I guess?

I believe they were surprised here and before they could react, Karim got to them first.

I can say the same thing but it's okay since the author isn't an expert in martial arts. I'd say that compared to other novels in webnovel, this one got it right in the technique, especially the mount reversal.

We don't know the intention of the mc yet, if he wants to keep in power or not, but I'm not entirely sure about the constitution part. Yes they modeled it after the british but doesn't entirely mean they are the same. The king holds the executive power, meaning he is the chief of the armed forces, or the president of the empire. That doesn't how it works in the british right?