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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym1mth
    Replied to LinnaeusMorsche

    You don't need satellites for local computers and servers.

    Every week, the business would deliver the small pieces of clay to the banks and get the money.
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym2mth
    Replied to saintofcookies

    I'm aware of my own sagacity but thank you regardless.

    ***
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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to LostM

    I don't think that's likely tbh.

    Every week, the business would deliver the small pieces of clay to the banks and get the money.
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    Based

    At least not until you two are married."
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    Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
    Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to SMomoTempest

    Probably, but "or" can be pronounced like "er" sometimes, such as in "doctor," "author," "color," etc. And Pator isn't a common name, so i still have no idea how to pronounce it. Thx for trying to help tho.

    "My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to SMomoTempest

    Thank you, but that doesn't help. Is it a long a like "pay tor" or a short a like "pat tor"? Is the t sharp or soft like "pat tor" or "patter"? Is the or pronounced like "or" (as I think it should be) or "er"?

    "My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to SMomoTempest

    How do you pronounce Pator?

    "My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    This just puts such a foul, foul, foul taste in my mouth. Wish i was kidding when i say I'm considering dropping the book bc of it.

    Ch 176 Chapter 176 – Not a Problem
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    That number seems EXTREMELY high.

    Well, if one were to use the guy as a reference, Nick would be a man weighing about 240 kilos with a low body fat percentage.
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to Jeffrey_Lamptey

    Kind of hard to read with the formatting but seems right. Good job my dude.

    So, if an Initial Hatchling had a power of 1, an Early Hatchling would have 1.5, a Mid Hatchling would have about 2.3, a Late Hatchling would have about 3.4, and a Peak Hatchling would have about 5.
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    Unfortunate

    "Then, I would like to work with the Dreamer right now," Jenny said. "Although, I need to inform my partner at home first. She hasn't heard from me the entire day, and she will be very worried if I stay until deep into the night."
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to Aeg

    nope

    "Then, I would like to work with the Dreamer right now," Jenny said. "Although, I need to inform my partner at home first. She hasn't heard from me the entire day, and she will be very worried if I stay until deep into the night."
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    These adjectives feel a little redundant and unnecessarily repetitive

    Even though he had just slept for eight hours, he felt very exhausted and tired.
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    That's what i say when I'm in your mother's bed.

    'I'm fucking retarded!'
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    More communist tendencies

    'I am essentially taking money from someone without doing anything. Isn't that like stealing? I mean, I didn't do anything.'
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to RedEyesIllusion

    More like execution actually.

    "This is the most popular and famous torture method from the old world!" the torturer said. "We found many depictions of this torture method in the ruins."
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Replied to _Cupid_

    Just because a duty is unperformed does not mean it is not a duty.

    'Someone that has the power to change something should have a duty to change things.'
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    How on earth do you pronounce that?

    "My name's Pator Tailor, sir. Please, refer to me as Pator."
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    The world building seems a bit odd here. Restricted communication makes sense, but completely blocked communication over distances? They need rather advanced technology to make a lot of what they have (like the containment units), and that likely included at least basic computer technology, right? Or is this specific hospital out of the loop for some reason?

    Every week, the business would deliver the small pieces of clay to the banks and get the money.
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • GenericPseudonym
    GenericPseudonym3mth
    Commented

    Is it hyperbolic or a pyramid? If both, how is it both?

    The structure was a humongous curvy pyramid in the shape of a hyperbola. It was made of reflective metal and was nearly two kilometers high and five kilometers wide. 
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    Kill the Sun
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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