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I believe you are correct because I think (I don't know 100%) that what you are saying about the stones only working in their universe is true.
you put termite here instead of ants
DND just got way more complicated
I somewhat explained it to soul wing in this post you could look if you want
well this novel doesn't really explain anything so...
well the hand to hand could've evolved to the master combatant (maybe even the gun skills as it would kinda make sense)
also even with business skill it wouldn't do much as during this time racism was real bad so he wouldn't be able to put it to much use
well with the engineering skill he can make his own plane/helicopter and he would need to learn how to pilot
I get what your saying but if the author of a novel runs out of ideas/creativity I would say to take a break instead of trying to push through. Because pushing on without much creativity/ideas can make a story dull/boring/lifeless. I'm not saying give up but a break is nice to do. But sadly this story is dropped
what do you mean?
He killed her???
but since he is now Hiro he will have to take responsibility for it. and he just told her that she should've done the work he was supposed to do because he wasn't that good at it/slacking. Which is unfair to the girl because she did everything she needed to and the original Hiro failed to do his part
what's all this blood on you and your talons
" was all they had for dinner" seems like there isn't a zombie apocalypse happening where food and water would be precious
I'm not trying to be rude here but it's the MC unreasonable luck so far
WHAT IS THIS LIBRARY??? Next thing you know they are going to go to a house with EXTREMELY good defenses, ranged weapons like guns and bows/crossbows, and back up generators (ik that some people have backup generators but these are the magical kind that will work almost no matter what)
well with luck like this makes it seem like any problem won't be a problem. Making the MC somewhat lucky is fine but now kind of luck makes it seem like they are the only people with some zombies around. are they the only people scavenging? and a final question when will the electricity get cut off... (and also hopefully you know that gasoline has a shelf life of about 3 months so you better have a new mode of transportation then))
But why is this here in a library (I would somewhat understand if this was in a place like an antique store pawn shop museums someone's house but I don't believe this would be in a library)
what are the MC controls on the other elements (ik they practice in secret so I wouldn't say that amazingly good. Also you may have said this before but what are the rarity of each element. Elements like Space, Water, Fire, and Metal are extremely good for the apocalypse)