Jumble

He’s kinda got a point, Not gonna lie

I also wish the story was longer, I was able to finish it in 25 minutes. I understand this is a short story but I would like to see more next time

I like the way the author uses detailed descriptions throughout the story to put an image in the reader’s mind. The ending is sort of obscure and hopefully a second part to it comes out that better explains it. I do wish there was more world development, we never really know where this story takes place.

Although it’s clear this writer is still new to the craft, this story was wiite entertaining so far and has good original characters. I like the story so far and I’m hooked into It