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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_162mth
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    femme Fatale! nice!

    Ch 150 The Depraved Han Quechan (2) R18
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    The Carnation Goddess
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_162mth
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    it's either "demon empress" or "demoness emperor". you don't need female gender version of both words to identify one individual.

    Ch 1248 Ji Yuan vs. the Demoness Empress (2)
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_165mth
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    writing for this story has already been completed AFAIK. it would be interesting on how the boys try to get Amy. she is smart enough to figure out something is amiss, particularly since these guys had issues with Alan before. it shouldn't work unless she falls into the trap because of her friends.

    Ch 1076 Sinister Plot brewing!
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    6 Times a Day
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_165mth
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    Food?

    Ch 596 Chaotic Chase (II)
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    Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_165mth
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    Your immortal titles are pretty cool.

    Ch 595 Chaotic Chase (I)
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    Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_168mth
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    How did JY's companions miss the beast if its size was as you described?

    Ch 939 What has just happened?!
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    I understand the need to minimize drama, but the reunion of two characters with this much history requires it. Also, no sane mature adult will drop the "I love you" bomb here, that too in public. Even if he had an ulterior motive, the timing of this makes no sense. JY's assist in this matter is also unnecessary. I would strongly suggest rewriting the dialogue in this chapter. It is too simplistic where more nuance is necessary.

    Ch 854 Another Immortal Divine Lord has descended
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    so, we hit the climax? quite anticlimactic lol. at least give us Achilles vs DXX vs JY in any order.

    Ch 851 The 6 Supreme Divine Gods
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    Harem Protagonist EX strikes again XD!

    Ch 849 Number 1 vs. Ji Yuan (4)
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    I hope the fight doesn't end with each of them only exchanging big moves.

    Ch 847 Number 1 vs. Ji Yuan (2)
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
    Commented

    So it begins :)

    Ch 838 Second Time with the Goddess Destiny
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
    Replied to GodOfDeath1999

    Is that relevant to the story by any chance?

    Ch 837 The Heavens Annihilation Profound Arts (3)
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone could get along :p

    Ch 836 The Heavens Annihilation Profound Arts (2)
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    1. Is it too late to have a name for this destiny goddess? It seems cumbersome to call her destiny goddess every time. But, scenes with her have been hilarious so far.2. XY and AT are in a conundrum. I am a bit confused about XY"s characteristics. As a former and current highest cultivator, she has a responsibility to inform the dangers about ascension. But, it will come at the cost of tarnishing a legend's (and now family member) character. Interesting conflict.

    Ch 830 Ji Yuan is a fake ‘Genius Cultivator’
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
    Commented

    ahahahahahahahahaha

    Ch 823 Ji Yuan, what is Your Question?
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
    Commented

    die-hard hero...drop of blood...soul of true devil god...dark devil goddess...next chapter isn't the climax, right? that will be a bummer before the actual games :(

    Ch 820 Inside the Sacred Temple of Delphi
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    In a twisted way, Achilles showed his love for his daughter...by never allowing her to cultivate, she never fell into her mother's fate. She lived and died, ignorant. Combine that with him refusing to take rewards, you, my friend, have set up for a complex character. Looking forward to how you handle him.

    Ch 816 Goddess Ai Tina and Xu Yifei
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
    Commented

    Finally DXX is becoming more relevant. I like what you are cooking, Mr. Author. If you wanna add info about the demon realm, you can do it in small snippets every chapter and create like a parallel storyline. Don't think it should be a problem long as you don't interrupt JY's storyline. Having said that, I wouldn't recommend multi-chapter breaks as JY's journey is unfolding at a nice rate.

    Ch 806 Yun Chi vs. Number 1 Ding Xiaoxiao
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
    Commented

    ceo romance....ahahhahahaahaha. Nice dig!

    Ch 800 Imperfect Hero vs. the Perfect Hero.
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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  • Aegis_16
    Aegis_169mth
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    Mb JY isn't the smartest cookie, but is he unaware about male-female power imbalance before AT's time? If this isn't the case, then shouldn't the first question be if there were any female immortals before AT and, how she accumulated powers by having only 6 weak immortals every 500 years? Some other questions I can think of are:1. highest level of cultivation2. insinuate AT has reached close to it3. how she has protected her people4. why the other lords never ganged up on her given their lifestyle before AT's ascensionI have one other question about XY-JY interaction, but will wait until I see next chapterP.S: an earlier post recommended differentiating serious vs joke moments with the spirits since the spirits could read his mind. I think he has a point.

    Ch 799 The Doubts of Ji Yuan
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    The Romantic Cultivator
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