hey, author...

A fairly good book, although the Grammer is... not great... it is still much better than many other books I have seen on this site and a worthwhile read thus far. Honestly this is the last book on here that I'm still reading. Then I can switch over to Kindle and audible.

thank you for showing how she has progressed thus far, and not dodging is a great debuff for rue😂

hey, anyone know if those two chapters are worth risking a difficult to cancel subscription for? Will I be left feeling more or less like this book is finished?

he was under attack by a group of trolls spamming negative reviews and whatnot. check his profile, it includes his comments, his most recent one basically says what happened and that he's taking a break.

so, where can I find the imaginary screenshots of a third party angering another third party? we can post photos or links in a comment, so it shouldn't be difficult to prove that they aren't entirely made up but rather fabricated, or out of context.

why the heck are all of the critical reviews saying he's a simp? if you guys are going to make up bad reasons to post critical reviews at least use your limited brainpower to think of various complaints.

as someone who cannot read that... why even write a review to a book that is completely written in English if you can't write the review in English. I am legitimately curious as to what sort of feedback you have about this book. please shove this through Google translate for us monolinguals.

one, *steals gif*two, it is clear you haven't read the novel. unless this female villan you claim Noah simps over only appears in the last two chapter she doesn't exist.three, This is a PvE situation, not a PvP one. THERE IS NOT YET A VILLANfour, get a life instead of making bot accounts and attacking small authors. sheesh.

volatile, sure. I would agree with that. but unstable, unexplained, and simp. Those do not reflect the writing of this story in the slightest.

apparently nobody has, myself included. feel free to post something supporting your bogus claims though.

yeah, sometimes these books can get a bit hard to follow with the high number of skills😂 but I think he did fairly well all things considered. (everyone would have had trouble if he started eating everything like I would have)

he was never psycho, or evil. and he has not turned into a simp. Don't review bomb a small book over non-existent problems.

"lovey dovey" do you mean how he doesn't kill off a large group of people for annoying him? Or experimenting with his command zombie power in a way that affords a dude the chance to survive? or holding a girl's hand one time? sorry mate, I'm at chapter 106 (of 108) and I have not seen anything that would warrant this type of complaint

The writing quality for this book is amazing given the platform and the speed at which this book was written. But the reason I placed this book at five stars is because of the author's comments. Update notes, ect. he was very clearly trying to improve the book to the best of his ability. The story wasn't entirely original in its base and format. But it has set itself apart in more than enough ways to be considered original and well written.I have noticed several comments by the author pertaining to a group of trolls that have been posting false reviews and accusations. Yes FALSE reviews and accusations. I hope he decides to pick this story back up, but it may have been discontinued.

or just, you know, don't mention the XP bar?

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jumping spider/human?