this is interesting... i’ve already done with the 6 chapters and im kinda into it, the way you personas and character interacts and all its worth the read :) but for the action part you can improve it, and i know you can do it :)

the book is worth the read, the revised chapter is way better that the last one, hoping for more update, and by the way i really like the new Cover! it can attract more readers! keep up the good work author :)

i really like the revised, it makes the story smooth now [img=recommend]

here we go again:)

here we go again....

Thanks for the review, dont worry ill be fixing the smalls and errors soon😊

more chapter will come :)

Hello Author here!! Giving 5 star review for myself. I would not boast myself coz you will find the truth after reading the novel. So, go and read it. Thank you everyone!! SerielEater