Tdre
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Tdre3yrCommentedWhere does one find a Ray 😂
"No... she's missing... in danger! Why should we waste time on something like this!?" I shouted. "Rose! Where are you?!"- Tdre3yrCommented
As I lunged forward at Rose, my hand reaching out. Add “ed” behind lunge
She paced forward, but suddenly, she tripped and reached out her hand towards me. I quickly let go of Sam. He freefell towards the ground as I lunge forward at Rose, my hand reaching out. - Tdre3yrCommented
How nostalgic, not how nostalgia because nostalgia is the feeling and nostalgic is the adjective to refer to the thing the is producing the feeling
"How nostalgia... everything still looks the same but... with soldiers blocking the side paths," I laughed. - Tdre3yrCommented
Supposed to be Jets flew not jets flied
We ran and headed straight towards them. I held on to Sam's hand and Rose held on to the other one. Jets flied above us as we kept hearing the sounds of bombing in the distance. - Tdre3yrCommented
It should be I applied torque. No “a”
"Lucky fucking me," I shouted while picking up the L-shaped pipe that fell a moment ago; I shoved it into the gap. Using it as a crowbar, I applied a torque[6] to it and managed to break the screw opening the vents. - Tdre3yrCommented
Should be your not you’re since you’re is basically you are if I’m not mistaken. Sorry if this is annoying
"So? You're decision."