Kelsey_Salimi
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I really enjoy learning all of these facts!
Why do they have to nod so often? Still great story and hard to stop reading. Another note would be to put a little more detail about their clothes and the food. Keep up the good work!
Oh also taste as well.
Love this story. Notes: needs more smells and touch/feel aspects. Other then that I would read this. Get it published!