Kevin_Herrington

See this! I just gifted the story: Golden Gachapon

608 confirmed kills, and ten uncommon rifles done before lunch, Dom be doin work. journeyman needs to nut up or shut up

sorry, no I can't as, I have dropped it from my reading list after 100 or so chapters. Sorry

Characters and setting seem to be well fleshed out,though with odd, somewhat justifable hiccups. Power scaking and growth of the mc is acceptable. What really kills the story is the writers habit to either ramble on in a circle and often repeat information. Perhaps in later chapters the writer will learn to right more fluidly, I, unfortunately will not be there to read it. This work does not deserve a ranking spot on the golden ticket list.

i dont think its a glitch i think its more likely that the author scheduled 2 chapters but didnt have them written. my other privlege story i get isnt having problems.

If you cannot actually maintain a rate of 2 chapters a day, it is better to reduce yourself to one chapter a day. releasing dummy or duplicate chapters will get you dropped by readers, as will failing to keep your promises.

ive noticed you have a tendency to repeat information in alternate ways. you need to stop, it feels like your just trying to pad out numbers. otherwise the story is good.

thats only if bloodline like that are mutually exclusive. the magi bloodline could be something like an auxillary bloodline that could be added to existing bloodlines or mox of blood lines..so it could be something like 32% demon 68%basic human but the overall is also 38% magi

isnt this just a rip off of another story, black haze. everything is the same except for the bullied noble for the mc to befriend. literaly the same