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Thanks for the chapter, the only thing that intrigues me is; Didn't you receive kill stats when killing the Razorline?
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Very good novel, it has its continuity problems and other details that can be easily solved with an editor. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love it 🤩, so far I would only recommend correcting the part where the goblin stabs for the first time, he shouldn't have the knife but it is easily corrected with, "he snatched the knife from the goblin who tried to stab the woman."
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